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James Nicoll  
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From: jdnic...@panix.com (James Nicoll)
Date: 2 Nov 2009 11:24:37 -0500
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Subject: Petty nit picking
        As long as the plot moves along nicely, does it matter if they
use the wrong name for the current Governor General of America?
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Dorothy J Heydt  
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From: djhe...@kithrup.com (Dorothy J Heydt)
Date: Mon, 2 Nov 2009 16:33:03 GMT
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Subject: Re: Petty nit picking
In article <hcn145$ea...@panix3.panix.com>,

James Nicoll <jdnic...@panix.com> wrote:
>    As long as the plot moves along nicely, does it matter if they
>use the wrong name for the current Governor General of America?

?????  Context?

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James Nicoll  
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From: jdnic...@panix.com (James Nicoll)
Date: Mon, 2 Nov 2009 17:11:05 +0000 (UTC)
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Subject: Re: Petty nit picking
In article <KsHpz3.1...@kithrup.com>,
Dorothy J Heydt <djhe...@kithrup.com> wrote:

>In article <hcn145$ea...@panix3.panix.com>,
>James Nicoll <jdnic...@panix.com> wrote:
>>        As long as the plot moves along nicely, does it matter if they
>>use the wrong name for the current Governor General of America?

>?????  Context?

        Part of an ongoing discussion: as long as the story is good,
do authors need to fact-check.

        Not related to anything I am reading (although I did spend some
time reading on the regency to narrow down when one book I am reading is
set. The best I could do was 1816-1820, but it does seem to be set in
that stretch, as opposed to "the 19th century, when Victoria was Queen,
Britain was at war with Napoleon, and Herbert George Wells had just
terrified the gentle folk of America with a Dramatic Rendition of War
of the Worlds").

        Come to think of it, a mystery I cannot name is the exact opposite
of this: not only is there extensive fact checking but for much of the book
it's possible to narrow down where the characters have to be to within meters.

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Quadibloc  
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From: Quadibloc <jsav...@ecn.ab.ca>
Date: Mon, 2 Nov 2009 09:57:41 -0800 (PST)
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Subject: Re: Petty nit picking
On Nov 2, 10:11 am, jdnic...@panix.com (James Nicoll) wrote:

> and Herbert George Wells had just
> terrified the gentle folk of America with a Dramatic Rendition of War
> of the Worlds

Ah. Radio must have been invented early in that timeline if that was
done by the author, rather than much later, in the 1930s, by the actor
Orson Welles.

Since the United States being subject to a Governor-General means the
outcome of the Revolutionary War was different, if there even was one,
that would also mean that getting the name of the holder of that
office wrong would be an _internal inconsistency_ in the series, not a
historical inaccuracy.

I think it's reasonable to fault an author for not even keeping track
of his own characters, even if one would make allowances for the
amount of historial reasearch they can reasonably engage in.

John Savard


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Howard Brazee  
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From: Howard Brazee <how...@brazee.net>
Date: Mon, 02 Nov 2009 19:19:53 -0700
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Subject: Re: Petty nit picking
On Mon, 2 Nov 2009 17:11:05 +0000 (UTC), jdnic...@panix.com (James

Nicoll) wrote:
>    Part of an ongoing discussion: as long as the story is good,
>do authors need to fact-check.

If I'm reading a book, and the plot's moving fine, I don't want to be
awakened from my reading by a "what the hell" moment.   Unintentional
distracting from the writing is not good writing.

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than in the clause which confides the question of war or peace
to the legislature, and not to the executive department."

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Michael Grosberg  
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Date: Tue, 3 Nov 2009 02:23:37 -0800 (PST)
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Subject: Re: Petty nit picking
On Nov 3, 4:19 am, Howard Brazee <how...@brazee.net> wrote:

I totally agree. Such things make me stop thinking about the
characters or plot and start thinking about the author and writing.
And sometimes you don't even know if it's a fact checking error, or
just a case of the author "giving the truth scope" (i.e.,
intentionally changing facts for some purpose).
I had one such moment recently - I read a book in which a character
popped an Alanis Morissette CD into a car stereo, then proceeded to
shout some lyrics (presumably singing along with the music). Problem
is, the lyrics that were quoted were a garbled version of "Bitch" by
Meredith Brooks. This took me immediately out of the book. I  lost
track of the plot and started finding alternate explanation to how
this could happen, like, the character thought it was an Alanis song,
mis-remembered the lyrics, and started singing without paying
attention to what was actually playing. Or, it's some sort of joke by
the author (he could have based it on some real life event). Or the
author was very, very sloppy (not likely, he's a music buff).

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T Guy  
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From: T Guy <Tim.Bate...@redbridge.gov.uk>
Date: Tue, 3 Nov 2009 05:23:57 -0800 (PST)
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Subject: Re: Petty nit picking
( Quadibloc <jsav...@ecn.ab.ca> ):

> Ah. Radio must have been invented early in that timeline if that was
> done by the author, rather than much later, in the 1930s, by the actor
> Orson Welles.

(T Guy):

I wonder if this was some sort of consequence of Napoleon lasting
longer than he did in OTL so he could worry Queen Victoria?

T Guy


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Kurt Busiek  
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From: Kurt Busiek <k...@busiek.com>
Date: Tue, 3 Nov 2009 09:16:48 -0800
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Subject: Re: Petty nit picking
On 2009-11-03 02:23:37 -0800, Michael Grosberg
<grosberg.mich...@gmail.com> said:

I recall a book where the lead character had a cat named "Griggs,"
after the Mel Gibson character in LETHAL WEAPON.

It bugged me enough that I e-mailed the author, who basically said,
"Oops!  We'll fix that for the paperback."

Doesn't affect the story any, bu stuff like that -- or like when the TV
show CASTLE gets comics-industry or publishing-industry stuff wrong --
does bounce me out of the story and remind me that I'm reading words on
paper, not being immersed into story.

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nuny@bid.nes  
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Date: Tue, 3 Nov 2009 11:52:12 -0800 (PST)
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Subject: Re: Petty nit picking
On Nov 3, 9:16 am, Kurt Busiek <k...@busiek.com> wrote:

  Related problem; made-up unpronounceables will jerk me right out of
a story while my audio processing wetware tries desperately to figure
out how to pronounce it.

  OTOH Halrloprillalar gave me no trouble...

  Mark L. Fergerson


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Michael Grosberg  
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From: Michael Grosberg <grosberg.mich...@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 3 Nov 2009 13:20:11 -0800 (PST)
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Subject: Re: Petty nit picking
On Nov 3, 9:52 pm, "n...@bid.nes" <alien8...@gmail.com> wrote:

>   Related problem; made-up unpronounceables will jerk me right out of
> a story while my audio processing wetware tries desperately to figure
> out how to pronounce it.

>   OTOH Halrloprillalar gave me no trouble...

>   Mark L. Fergerson

What if the unpronounceable name is simply in a different language
instead of being made-up? Forex, Polish and Hungarian names are
notoriously hard to pronounce. I've no idea how to pronounce
"Szczepański" or"Szöllôs", but I'm sure *someone* would.

Or what if the name is *supposed* to be unpronouncable, and the
narrative explicitly states this is the closest you could get with
human phonemes to a name that is normally uttered by a being with a
very different sound making apparatus?


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W. Citoan  
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From: "W. Citoan" <wcit...@NOSPAM-yahoo.com>
Date: Tue, 3 Nov 2009 21:55:00 +0000 (UTC)
Subject: Re: Petty nit picking

This was already discussed and explained to you in the "10 Notes for
writing science fiction" thread.  That is simply the way some readers
read.  For them, it will cause them problems.  Even if the author wanted
it to be unpronounceable, it is still going to jerk them out of the flow.

It's not bad for an author to do it, but it doesn't mean every reader is
going to like; nor that they should like it.  Tastes differ.

- W. Citoan
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Dave Hansen  
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From: Dave Hansen <i...@hotmail.com>
Date: Tue, 3 Nov 2009 17:21:51 -0800 (PST)
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Subject: Re: Petty nit picking
On Nov 3, 3:20 pm, Michael Grosberg <grosberg.mich...@gmail.com>
wrote:
[...]

> What if the unpronounceable name is simply in a different language
> instead of being made-up? Forex, Polish and Hungarian names are
> notoriously hard to pronounce. I've no idea how to pronounce
> "Szczepański" or"Szöllôs", but I'm sure *someone* would.

I am (almost exactly) in the middle of "One Hundred Years of Solitude"
by Gabriel Garcia Marquez.  It's at least arguably on-topic, since it
has ghosts, magic, and ESP, though it's not really a traditional
fantasy.

At first some of the names did bother me because I didn't (don't) know
how to pronounce them for sure.  But about 25 pages in, I decided how
I was going to pronounce each name inside my head, regardless of
whther that was correct or not, and the reading went more smoothly.

The problem, however, is compounded by the similarity of names to one
another.  For example, we have (in the order of their birthdays) Jose
Arcadio Buendia, Jose Arcadio, Arcadio, Jose Arcadio Segundo, and Jose
Arcadio (again).  Another set of characters (again, in birthday order)
include Aureliano (who also has 17 sons each named Aureliano, but who,
fortunately IMHO, do not much play into the "plot"), Aureliano Jose,
Aureliano Segundo, Aureliano Babilonia, and Aureliano (again).

Of course, this is all on purpose, and the author likes to play with
timelines, pulling the narrative back and forth through time, like a
spoon stirring a pot of soup.  Which makes the book a rich literary
experience (I'm sure), but which doesn't help the reader understand
what is going on, and doesn't really add much anything to the story
(if there is one in there somewhere).

But my point is that figuring out where we are in the timeline and
which of the half-dozen Arcadios or Aurelianos the author is referring
to at the moment make the reading more of a chore than it has to be.
However, in this case, I believe that was intentional.


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Michael Grosberg  
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From: Michael Grosberg <grosberg.mich...@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 3 Nov 2009 22:10:32 -0800 (PST)
Local: Wed, Nov 4 2009 2:10 pm
Subject: Re: Petty nit picking
On Nov 4, 3:21 am, Dave Hansen <i...@hotmail.com> wrote:

Don't forget all the women named Remedios. How many of them were
there? I forget.
My copy had a lineage chart at the end.

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nuny@bid.nes  
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Date: Tue, 3 Nov 2009 23:31:09 -0800 (PST)
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Subject: Re: Petty nit picking
On Nov 3, 10:10 pm, Michael Grosberg <grosberg.mich...@gmail.com>
wrote:

  The XKCD thread is over there------>

  Mark L. Fergerson


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Anthony Nance  
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From: na...@math.ohio-state.edu (Anthony Nance)
Date: 4 Nov 2009 13:47:10 GMT
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Subject: Re: Petty nit picking

Mine too.  There's such a chart of the primary characters on the
OHYoS page at Wikipedia.  There may be more detaield ones elsewhere.

OHYoS was one of those very few books that got better after
time went by, even though I didn't re-read it.

Tony


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Date: Wed, 4 Nov 2009 07:55:53 -0800 (PST)
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Subject: Re: Petty nit picking
On Nov 4, 1:21 am, Dave Hansen <i...@hotmail.com> wrote:

Okay, so that's Jab, JA, Ar, JAS, JA-II, and Au, AJ, AS, AB, Au-II.
What do you win if you prove the author screwed up somewhere?  A
hundred beers, all weakly brewed?  Or does he play the damn "Magic
Realism" card?

Does anyone want to explain the rules of "Magic Realism: The
Gathering"?

You know, hypothetically.


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Date: Wed, 4 Nov 2009 07:59:02 -0800 (PST)
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Subject: Re: Petty nit picking
On Nov 2, 4:24 pm, jdnic...@panix.com (James Nicoll) wrote:

>         As long as the plot moves along nicely, does it matter if they
> use the wrong name for the current Governor General of America?

When there is a new Governor General of America, how long does it take
for everyone to hear about it?  Is there a term limit, or are you it
till you die?

Also, is New Year and the calendar year change in January, or in
March?  I think there's a wrinkle there that I haven't gotten my head
around.


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Subject: Re: Petty nit picking
On Nov 2, 5:11 pm, jdnic...@panix.com (James Nicoll) wrote:

Oh, nicely told!  I suppose Wells played upon fears of French invasion
and anti-Communard sentiment...

(In our time line it was Germany...)


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Date: Wed, 04 Nov 2009 11:00:42 -0600
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Subject: Re: Petty nit picking
In article
<1e5035ae-cba3-4eda-b270-26b964f63...@z41g2000yqz.googlegroups.com>,
 Michael Grosberg <grosberg.mich...@gmail.com> wrote:

> What if the unpronounceable name is simply in a different language
> instead of being made-up? Forex, Polish and Hungarian names are
> notoriously hard to pronounce. I've no idea how to pronounce
> "Szczepański" or"Szšll™s", but I'm sure *someone* would.

      I once taught in a school district where we had many Polish names
and I got used to the fact that pronunciation of those names and the
relationship of spelling to pronunciation I was used to were very different 8-)

> Or what if the name is *supposed* to be unpronouncable, and the
> narrative explicitly states this is the closest you could get with
> human phonemes to a name that is normally uttered by a being with a
> very different sound making apparatus?

I have no problem with this.

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Robert Carnegie  
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Date: Wed, 4 Nov 2009 09:02:28 -0800 (PST)
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Subject: Re: Petty nit picking
On Nov 2, 5:11 pm, jdnic...@panix.com (James Nicoll) wrote:

On reflection, a fantasy novel called "The New Testament" has this
kind of problem.  There's some weirdness about a worldwide census that
apparently didn't take place in actual history, there's geography that
they say is wrong - the author may not have visited the country where
it's set.  At one point the hero apparently walks from point A to B,
but they're places on opposite shores of a large body of water.  Sat
nav was not involved...

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Subject: Re: Petty nit picking
On Nov 4, 7:02 pm, Robert Carnegie <rja.carne...@excite.com> wrote:

Not being a christian, but being familiar with said country, I feel
curious - Care to expand? what large body of water are we talking
about?

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Don Aitken  
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Date: Wed, 04 Nov 2009 17:57:33 +0000
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Subject: Re: Petty nit picking
On Wed, 04 Nov 2009 11:00:42 -0600, erilar

<dra...@chibardun.net.invalid> wrote:
>In article
><1e5035ae-cba3-4eda-b270-26b964f63...@z41g2000yqz.googlegroups.com>,
> Michael Grosberg <grosberg.mich...@gmail.com> wrote:

>> What if the unpronounceable name is simply in a different language
>> instead of being made-up? Forex, Polish and Hungarian names are
>> notoriously hard to pronounce. I've no idea how to pronounce
>> "SzczepaÅ?ski" or"SzÂ?llÂ?s", but I'm sure *someone* would.
>      I once taught in a school district where we had many Polish names
>and I got used to the fact that pronunciation of those names and the
>relationship of spelling to pronunciation I was used to were very different 8-)

I have no problem pronouncing Polish names as used by Poles in Polish;
the rules are simple and easily grasped. What is impossible is
guessing the pronunciations of their names likely to be employed by
Polish-Americans, which can be "anglicised" in a whole slew of
different ways over several generations. The same is true of lots of
other languages.

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Subject: Re: Petty nit picking
On Nov 4, 9:02 am, Robert Carnegie <rja.carne...@excite.com> wrote:

  Speaking of nitpicking, _The New Testament_ is a shared-fantasy-
world anthology.

  (Of course, so was _The Old Testament_.)

> kind of problem.  There's some weirdness about a worldwide census that
> apparently didn't take place in actual history, there's geography that
> they say is wrong - the author may not have visited the country where
> it's set.  At one point the hero apparently walks from point A to B,
> but they're places on opposite shores of a large body of water.  Sat
> nav was not involved...

  That level of tech doesn't exist in context. Certain kinds of magic
do, though they aren't called "magic". Also, while walking across
certain large real-world bodies of water is easy in local winter,
that's not mentioned in the episode you cite.

  The anthologies have other problems; the various authors don't seem
to have checked with each other; some story elements are repeated with
varying levels of accuracy.

  At least most of the proper names and place names are
pronounceable. ;>)

  Mark L. Fergerson


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Joseph Nebus  
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 More options Nov 5, 2:38 am
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From: nebu...@-rpi-.edu (Joseph Nebus)
Date: 4 Nov 2009 13:38:02 -0500
Local: Thurs, Nov 5 2009 2:38 am
Subject: Re: Petty nit picking

Don Aitken <don-ait...@freeuk.com> writes:
>I have no problem pronouncing Polish names as used by Poles in Polish;
>the rules are simple and easily grasped. What is impossible is
>guessing the pronunciations of their names likely to be employed by
>Polish-Americans, which can be "anglicised" in a whole slew of
>different ways over several generations. The same is true of lots of
>other languages.

        One of the modest joys of my father's life is correcting the
radio traffic reports on their pronunciation of the Kosciuszko Bridge.  
I assume it brings him joy, as his campaign seems to be doing nothing
to getting Traffic And Weather Together closer to a pronunciation that
treated it as a Polish name, and it would be a shame if nothing were
to come of all that effort.  

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From: Quadibloc <jsav...@ecn.ab.ca>
Date: Wed, 4 Nov 2009 10:50:41 -0800 (PST)
Local: Thurs, Nov 5 2009 2:50 am
Subject: Re: Petty nit picking
On Nov 4, 8:55 am, Robert Carnegie <rja.carne...@excite.com> wrote:

> Does anyone want to explain the rules of "Magic Realism: The
> Gathering"?

Ah, Jorge Luis Borges and Gabriel Garcia-Marquez are two different
authors. So one doesn't need to worry that when a card is played (a
"wish" card) that lets you play 'a card that you own from outside the
game', the game will pause for an excessively long amount of time
while the player roams the shelves of an infinite array of rooms
containing every possible card...

But then, compared to the early days, when Phil Foglio was still
considered an acceptable artist, recent Magic sets have tended
strongly towards more realistic art.

John Savard


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